CRO breakdown of Jeremiah O’Brian's coaching click-through. Design analysis and expert conversion insights by Apexure.
What is ConvertScore™? ConvertScore™ is Apexure's proprietary landing page performance metric. We evaluate every page across four dimensions — Copy & Messaging, Layout & Hierarchy, Trust & Social Proof, and CTA & Conversion Path — to produce a single score out of 100.
When Jeremiah O’Brian needed a click-through that converts B2C visitors, the brief came down to one question: what does this specific audience need to see before they’ll take action?
We started by identifying the conversion barriers. In the coaching space, Consumers make faster decisions, but they’re also quicker to bounce. The page has three seconds to earn their attention. Every design decision that followed was a direct response to those barriers.
The dark layout was a deliberate choice, not an aesthetic preference. Dark backgrounds create natural contrast that draws the eye to lighter content blocks and brightly coloured CTA buttons. They also convey a premium feel that differentiates from the sea of white-background competitors. We balanced readability by using off-white text (not pure white, which causes eye strain on dark backgrounds) and ensured sufficient contrast ratios for accessibility compliance.
Custom icons break up content sections and create visual rhythm. Without them, a landing page becomes a wall of text that no one reads. Each icon reinforces its section’s message through dual-channel communication — visitors absorb the meaning from both the visual and the text simultaneously. We invested in consistent icon styling (same weight, same colour palette, same grid) because inconsistent iconography signals carelessness.
We set a single objective for this page — one CTA, one goal. The beauty of a landing page is the single canvas to persuade the visitor to do one thing. Adding a secondary objective (promote the blog, link to careers, showcase other products) dilutes everything.
Trust signals are woven throughout the page, not isolated in one section. Reviews and ratings sit near the hero because that’s where bounce happens — social proof from real people reduces it. Testimonials with full names and photos appear in the mid-section because anonymous quotes carry no weight. Guarantees or trust badges sit near the CTA because that’s where commitment anxiety peaks.
"The biggest mistake in B2C is burying social proof at the bottom. Testimonials and reviews near the top of the page reduce bounce rate immediately because visitors see that real people — people like them — have already made this decision successfully."
Read more about how we approach trust signals in our guide to Ways To Increase Landing Page Social Proof.
We highlighted a testimonial from someone the target audience would identify with. People want to see that someone like them made this decision successfully. The closer the testimonial matches the visitor's situation, the stronger the persuasion.
As a click-through page, we deliberately avoided putting a form above the fold. The visitor absorbs the value proposition, sees proof, and only commits when they click through to the next step. By the time they reach the form, they’ve already decided — the form is just the mechanism. This sequencing consistently outperforms direct lead capture for coaching offerings.
"When clients say the page feels empty, we know we're getting close. Whitespace isn't wasted space — it's breathing room for theirs attention. If the page feels overwhelming, the answer is almost always doubling the padding, not adding more content."
We chose Webflow for this project because it gives us the right balance of design flexibility and conversion tooling. The platform integrates with the client’s existing content ecosystem, making the landing page part of their marketing stack rather than an isolated experiment.
More than 60% of Jeremiah O’Brian’s visitors arrive on mobile. We didn’t just make the page responsive — we loaded it on a phone, read the text aloud, tried the navigation, and attempted to convert with our thumbs. That process exposed friction points that analytics would never reveal. The CTA is accessible at every scroll depth, touch targets are sized for thumbs (not mouse pointers), and the form works without zooming.
We run speed tests on every page we build because a slow landing page is a leaking bucket. You can spend thousands driving traffic, but every additional second of load time costs conversions. We treat PageSpeed results as a to-do list, not just a score.
No landing page is finished — every page is a hypothesis that data validates or disproves. With today’s data, we’d make three changes:
"Every page we launch is a hypothesis. We set a single objective, measure against it, and then replace the weakest element rather than adding more. The goal is to persuade with as little as possible — not to dump everything onto one page and hope something sticks."
This Jeremiah O’Brian click-through demonstrates that effective landing page design is about strategic restraint, not visual complexity. Every element earns its place by moving visitors one step closer to conversion — and anything that doesn’t serve that purpose gets cut.
Browse our full collection of landing page examples to see how we apply these principles across industries. For methodology, read our guide to Landing Page Call to Action Tips.
Controlling what visitors see first, second, and third guides them toward the conversion goal.
People follow the actions of others. Testimonials, reviews, and client logos build trust and reduce hesitation.
Colours trigger emotional responses. Strategic use of contrast and brand colours guides attention to CTAs.
Eye-tracking shows people scan pages in an F-shape. Placing key content along this path increases engagement.
A high-converting coaching landing page has a single clear objective, a headline that empathises with the visitor's problem, trust signals placed strategically throughout (not buried at the bottom), and a CTA with action-specific copy. The design should reduce cognitive load through clean typography, generous whitespace, and progressive disclosure of information.
A dedicated click-through outperforms standard website pages because it has a single focused goal with no competing navigation links. Your main website serves multiple audiences and objectives, which dilutes conversion performance. A landing page removes the main nav, eliminates distractions, and guides every visitor toward one action.
The most effective CRO principles for B2C landing pages are social proof, urgency through genuine scarcity, colour psychology for CTA contrast, and empathetic copy that names the problem before presenting the solution.
A coaching landing page typically takes 2-3 weeks from brief to launch. This includes audience research, wireframing, visual design, copywriting, development, speed optimisation, and cross-device testing. We follow the principle that the page launches as a hypothesis — then we iterate based on real performance data.
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Founder & CEO of Apexure, Waseem worked in London's Financial Industry. He has worked on trading floors in BNP Paribas and Trafigura, developing complex business systems. Waseem loves working with Startups and combines data and design to create improved User Experiences.
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"The hero has one job: confirm the visitor is in the right place within three seconds. If they have to think about what you do, they're gone. We strip everything from the hero that doesn't serve that single purpose — no secondary CTAs, no feature lists, no animations competing for attention."